Английский с Эдгаром По. Падение дома Ашеров

And now, some days of bitter grief having elapsed (и теперь, /когда/ несколько дней горькой скорби прошли), an observable change came over the features of the mental disorder of my friend (заметная перемена произошла в чертах умственного = душевного расстройства моего друга; to come over – охватить: «найти на»). His ordinary manner had vanished (его обычная манера пропала). His ordinary occupations were neglected or forgotten (его обычные занятия были пренебрегаемы или забыты). He roamed from chamber to chamber with hurried, unequal, and objectless step (он бродил из комнаты в комнату поспешным, неровным и бесцельным шагом). The pallor of his countenance had assumed, if possible, a more ghastly hue (бледность его лица приобрела, если /это/ возможно, более жуткий оттенок) – but the luminousness of his eye had utterly gone out (но сияние его глаз: «глаза» совершенно погасло; luminous – светящийся; to go out – выйти; погаснуть).

And now, some days of bitter grief having elapsed, an observable change came over the features of the mental disorder of my friend. His ordinary manner had vanished. His ordinary occupations were neglected or forgotten. He roamed from chamber to chamber with hurried, unequal, and objectless step. The pallor of his countenance had assumed, if possible, a more ghastly hue – but the luminousness of his eye had utterly gone out.

The once occasional huskiness of his tone was heard no more (когда-то случавшаяся хрипотца его голоса не была слышна больше; occasional – нерегулярный; к случаю); and a tremulous quaver, as if of extreme terror, habitually characterized his utterance (и неверная дрожь, словно бы от крайнего ужаса, привычно характеризовала его речь; tremulous – дрожащий; quaver – дрожь; to utter – произносить). There were times, indeed, when I thought his unceasingly agitated mind was labouring with some oppressive secret (были моменты, в самом деле, когда я думал, что его беспрестанно возбужденный ум трудился над какой-то гнетущей тайной), to divulge which he struggled for the necessary courage (чтобы раскрыть которую, он боролся за необходимую смелость = набирался смелости).

The once occasional huskiness of his tone was heard no more; and a tremulous quaver, as if of extreme terror, habitually characterized his utterance. There were times, indeed, when I thought his unceasingly agitated mind was labouring with some oppressive secret, to divulge which he struggled for the necessary courage.