Английский с Эдгаром По. Падение дома Ашеров

The conditions of the sentience had been here, he imagined, fulfilled in the method of collocation of these stones (условия чувствительности были здесь, /как/ он представлял себе, удовлетворены = признаки этой чувствительности были, как он представлял себе, в способе соединения этих камней) – in the order of their arrangement (в порядке их расположения), as well as in that of the many fungi which overspread them (так же как в /расположении/ многих грибков, которые покрывали их; fungus; to overspread), and of the decayed trees which stood around (и сгнивших деревьев, которые стояли вокруг) – above all, in the long undisturbed endurance of this arrangement (сверх всего, в долгой, непотревоженной долговечности этого расположения), and in its reduplication in the still waters of the tarn (и в его повторении в тихих водах пруда).

The conditions of the sentience had been here, he imagined, fulfilled in the method of collocation of these stones – in the order of their arrangement, as well as in that of the many fungi which overspread them, and of the decayed trees which stood around – above all, in the long undisturbed endurance of this arrangement, and in its reduplication in the still waters of the tarn.

Its evidence – the evidence of the sentience – was to be seen, he said (ее свидетельство – свидетельство чувствительности – /должно/ было быть усмотрено, сказал он), (and I here started as he spoke,) (и я здесь вздрогнул, пока он говорил) in the gradual yet certain condensation of an atmosphere of their own about the waters and the walls (в постепенном, но верном сгущении их собственной атмосферы вокруг вод и стен; own – собственный; …of one’s own – собственный). The result was discoverable, he added, in that silent, yet importunate and terrible influence (результат был различим, добавил он, в том тихом, но неотступном и ужасном влиянии) which for centuries had moulded the destinies of his family (которое веками формировало судьбы его семьи), and which made him what I now saw him (и которое сделало его таким, каким я его теперь видел) – what he was (чем он был). Such opinions need no comment, and I will make none (подобные мнения не нуждаются ни в каких комментариях, и я никаких и не сделаю; none – никакой; ни один).

Its evidence – the evidence of the sentience – was to be seen, he said, (and I here started as he spoke,) in the gradual yet certain condensation of an atmosphere of their own about the waters and the walls. The result was discoverable, he added, in that silent, yet importunate and terrible influence which for centuries had moulded the destinies of his family, and which made him what I now saw him – what he was. Such opinions need no comment, and I will make none.