Stalin’s first foray into full-length book-editing was his involvement in the early stages of the multi-part
Extensive consultations and discussions took place with Stalin on the first two volumes of the civil war history. In 1934 Gorky sent him the draft of volume one, which the dictator then edited in some detail, marking hundreds of corrections. Mints recalled that ‘Stalin was pedantically interested in formal exactitude. He replaced “Piter” in one place with “Petrograd”, “February in the Countryside” as a chapter title (he thought it suggested a landscape) with “The February Bourgeois-Democratic Revolution”. . . . Grandiloquence was mandatory, too. “October Revolution” had to be replaced by “The Great October Revolution”. There were dozens of such corrections.’5
Stalin the pedant was also a stickler for correct dates, accurate captions and informative subheadings, as well as making liberal use of adjectival qualifiers such as ‘bourgeois’ and ‘proletarian’. He insisted the book’s title should include the name of the country in which the civil war took place, i.e. the USSR.6 Stalin was pleased with the result and in summer 1935 he wrote to congratulate Mints and his team: ‘You’ve done your work well – the book reads like a novel.’7 Elaine MacKinnon, the author of an in-depth study of the early years of the project, agrees:
The first two volumes were definitely popular in form, with colourful illustrations, photographs, and a prose style that is more characteristic of fictional narratives than scientific treatises. The characterizations are simplistic and project in animated tone clear images of good and evil, positive and negative. The narratives read like fiction, with many short sentences and continual efforts to build up a sense of tension and drama in the unfolding of events. Enemies are clearly defined. The role of workers, soldiers, and peasants is highlighted, despite innumerable references to Stalin and other Bolshevik leaders.8
In a pre-publication puff piece for the first volume, Mints explained the editorial process to readers of the party journal
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The civil war book fulfilled Stalin’s desire for heroic history to inspire the Soviet masses, but in the mid-1930s he was focused on a more important editing project – one aimed at key party members and activists: a new history of the party itself: a book that would explain clearly and credibly the complicated and tumultuous history of the party, its divisions and schisms, and its denouement in the Great Terror. How had the party succeeded in its historic mission while incubating clusters of high-level traitors, spies, assassins and saboteurs? The book also needed to educate members in matters theoretical, equip them with knowledge and understanding to shield them from malign influences and enable them to correctly implement the party line.10
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